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Beta needed for J2 Reverse Bang 2021


BETA FOUND!

Hi, I'm writing my first J2 story in German and then translating it into English. I'm looking for a beta to check my English grammar and spelling. But maybe she will also look at the plot and point out logic holes or mistakes. And don't be afraid of the eight-legged creepy-crawlies mentioned below - they're also just ordinary wereshifters who deserve and get happy endings.

Title: SPIDER
Fandom/Genre: Supernatural RPF, Action, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort, Love
Pairing: Jared Padalecki/Jensen Ackles
Words: 10,000 - 15,000
Type of beta you'd like: Grammar, Spelling, Plot
Posting Date: November 2021

Summary: Jensen hates spiders since he lost his family in the war. Then he is mistakenly fed with convicted criminals to the monster below the city. They fight back successfully and can escape.
Prince Jared is trapped in the cave in his huge spider form. By fighting with his "food" he comes into contact with the blood of his soul mate and can finally change his shape again and also flee. He chases the criminals because one of them is his companion.
Jensen narrowly escapes capture several times. Now he's also terrified of spiders. Nevertheless, he moves to Spider City to his uncle to hide there.
Then he receives an invitation to the royal ball in the Spider Castle, which he cannot refuse as a new city dweller.